Sorry, I'll add some metal to it. Gotta get that robots raping each other sound going. ;)
Mix could use a bit of work and that sidechaining seems a tad over done. Fairly nice composition wise and has a good bit of variation throughout. Also your stem link is broken, if you put a space before .com it usually fixes it. Does for me anyway.
Weak melodies. Also it's a tip on composition not production and not entirely subject to taste. Mix is generally good though and the rest of the song is well put together.
Well I guess I can just put in the actual chorus melody, but I wanted to do something fast and fun. But melodies do have to do with taste.
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