This has NOTHING to do with Jimmy Neutron! >:(
This has NOTHING to do with Jimmy Neutron! >:(
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Yo yo I might have some bars for this if you're interested, I'll pm in a week if you don't get to me first
Hell yea dude, dropped a message!
In the beginning the hi hat is very loud and the piano sounds a bit muddy. The rest is exceptional beyond a slightly muddy mix.
Thanks for the good feedback man!
Compositionally this is very good but I feel you could stand to humanize it a bit more. The rigid timing on the piano especially throws off the vibe a bit.
thanks for the feedback!
So incredibly loud
Burping commence.
Sorry, I'll add some metal to it. Gotta get that robots raping each other sound going. ;)
Mix could use a bit of work and that sidechaining seems a tad over done. Fairly nice composition wise and has a good bit of variation throughout. Also your stem link is broken, if you put a space before .com it usually fixes it. Does for me anyway.
Weak melodies. Also it's a tip on composition not production and not entirely subject to taste. Mix is generally good though and the rest of the song is well put together.
Well I guess I can just put in the actual chorus melody, but I wanted to do something fast and fun. But melodies do have to do with taste.
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